Walking forward, stride strong,
Soaking in the excitement all around..
A new start, a clean slate, say all
One remembered hurdle..
Each step forward, dint of sheer will.
Laughing aloud, smile bright,
Taking in the light and joy..
A new day, a bright sun, sees the eye
One flash of the day gone..
Upward curve of the lips, insurmountable effort.
Calming thought, beat steady,
Breathing in breathing out..
A new year, a century begins, knows the mind
One suppressed through,
Unclasping the fist on the heart, beyond impossible.
Some things hidden,
Some things momentarily forgotten..
But always there, never lost, not healed,
Still we go on, pretending no end..
A mask we wear for the world to see.
Some things hidden,
Some things momentarily forgotten..
But always there, never lost, not healed,
And still we go on, pretending no end..
A mask we wear for the world to see.
Simply awesome lines….
Great work comfy…. ๐
Oh and me first… ๐
Yes you are ๐
Thanks Tanishka
Lovely
Thanks A ๐
Very well written !
Thanks PV ๐
hmmmm
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hmmm=pondering over ! ๐
aah ๐
Sigh… that’s simply lovely!
I loved the last stanza – how very very true!
Thanks a bunch Pixie ๐
A mask we wear for the world to see….
How true Comfy …
The world sees our smile and nothing beyond…
The warmth that the face reflects and not the heard that is ironed.
We fool them each day…
But how will you fool me – I hear myself say!
We all do this..and we all are too involved in our misery to have time to look at others with any deepth. Such is life.
But till we are honest with ourselves, I think we do just fine.
Wow! a roller-coaster ride called life beautifully captured in those wonderful poetic notes ๐ ๐
Thanks CB ๐
Wow! That was lovely Comfy ๐
Thanks DI ๐
“Some things hidden,
Some things momentarily forgotten..
But always there, never lost, not healed,
Still we go on, pretending no end..
A mask we wear for the world to see.” So very true! Beautifully expressed, Comfy!
Thanks Deeps ๐
The last few lines say it all.. we have all these masks on us …
different face for different people and different situations …
but inside all that remains same ..
Bikram’s
We do..we all do..
Some things momentarily forgotten..But always there, never lost, not healed, Still we go on, pretending no end..
Very True…
Glad you think so ๐
Lovely! U must write more Comfy ๐
More than what I already write ๐ฎ
Your last stanza says a lot. Very lovely. Take care.
Thanks Shilpa ๐
Beautiful read Comfy!!! Loved it …so my kinds ๐
Aww..that is such a huge compliment..thanks Dew ๐
a new year with some more of those moments… but the masks remain same…
beautiful write
Thanks Rajlakshmi ๐
True, those words..and so beautifully connected together.
Wish you and everyone at home a very joyous 2011.
God bless!
Wishing you, H and Paapu the same as well ๐
You write poetry too? ๐ฎ
That was really really good, you know. I loved it! Happy new year to you guys!
Not really write poetry..just try and put things in that form once in blue moon.
Have a wonderful New Year P ๐
How do you write such deep, meaningful stuff? Beautiful!
Thanks Pepper ๐
Lovely, Comfy!
Thanks T ๐
Simply superb! ๐
Thanks EC ๐